tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post1363655287867656889..comments2024-03-09T00:15:50.624-08:00Comments on And Now Poems: Against the UnspeakableVictoriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-35077666345972981132013-09-25T22:41:26.822-07:002013-09-25T22:41:26.822-07:00Thanks for hte comments, mary and Lynne. And for ...Thanks for hte comments, mary and Lynne. And for the prompt Bob. this is the poem that got me poeming again, unstuck the log jam or something. I just went through and tightened it up. I like it better now. I wrote it so raw in the middle of hte night without being able to stop it that it was a little rough. Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-32814501586793259232013-09-25T05:16:27.907-07:002013-09-25T05:16:27.907-07:00This is SUCH a powerful poem, Victoria. It litera...This is SUCH a powerful poem, Victoria. It literally takes my breath away.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-42036253669073195262013-09-15T21:33:56.512-07:002013-09-15T21:33:56.512-07:00So very true, so very powerful and gutwrenching, V...So very true, so very powerful and gutwrenching, Victoria. Haunting, really. I know how hard this must have been to put to paper. Thank you.Lynnenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-62927454258050133012013-09-11T01:54:34.818-07:002013-09-11T01:54:34.818-07:00I wrote this one in response to my husband and wri...I wrote this one in response to my husband and writing group member Bob hendricks' prompt about our response to genocide and other horrors. This one kept me up til 3:54 on a work night. Had to get it right enough. I hope caffeine gets me through tomorros.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.com