tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post2930888695583967706..comments2024-03-09T00:15:50.624-08:00Comments on And Now Poems: Autumn RhythmsVictoriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-32449595319792686442010-09-28T22:43:08.232-07:002010-09-28T22:43:08.232-07:00Thank you Jingle.Thank you Jingle.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-9274207260651080912010-09-28T21:32:08.594-07:002010-09-28T21:32:08.594-07:00brilliant piece.
leaf energy,
life depends on dea...brilliant piece.<br /><br />leaf energy,<br />life depends on death...<br />wow.<br />I am impressed by your word power.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-32163753450915648602010-09-25T19:39:04.255-07:002010-09-25T19:39:04.255-07:00Thanks for all the appreciative comments. I am en...Thanks for all the appreciative comments. I am enjoying reading all of your poems too.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-65642728904335468482010-09-25T09:02:50.830-07:002010-09-25T09:02:50.830-07:00Oh, powerful wisdom here. "Life depends on de...Oh, powerful wisdom here. "Life depends on death." Wow. Great take on the prompt. I love all the different perspectives, and yours is a fresh look from another direction. Cool.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-52265271887737996452010-09-24T20:25:03.465-07:002010-09-24T20:25:03.465-07:00I love "Autumn sings in minor key" so ...I love "Autumn sings in minor key" so beautiful~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-55806297098426316662010-09-24T18:54:17.597-07:002010-09-24T18:54:17.597-07:00musical~ I can feel it :3 Wonderfully written^^musical~ I can feel it :3 Wonderfully written^^RiikaInfinityyhttp://riikainfinityy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-69993712333354808242010-09-24T12:45:53.540-07:002010-09-24T12:45:53.540-07:00Victoria this is beautifully said...i love it! :-)...Victoria this is beautifully said...i love it! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-60928763663805689682010-09-24T08:25:15.096-07:002010-09-24T08:25:15.096-07:00Oh this is powerful, I love the deeper meaning you...Oh this is powerful, I love the deeper meaning your ending gives the entire piece.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-31171424983219190782010-09-24T06:50:38.347-07:002010-09-24T06:50:38.347-07:00A well-structured poem - each stanza developing th...A well-structured poem - each stanza developing the idea further, and the last the killer. Thanks for sharing.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-75729204358620833002010-09-24T06:04:45.846-07:002010-09-24T06:04:45.846-07:00A provotative poem, Victoria!A provotative poem, Victoria!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-29127687391586761032010-09-24T02:51:01.561-07:002010-09-24T02:51:01.561-07:00A wonderful account of autumn, I really love this!...A wonderful account of autumn, I really love this!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-9355688478637792512010-09-23T23:58:31.902-07:002010-09-23T23:58:31.902-07:00Oh, I really like this.
You have captured 'n...Oh, I really like this. <br />You have captured 'natures' autumn with the truth that...<br />'Life depends on death'<br />and...<br />"Next year's rich harvest<br />depends on leaf energy<br />released by flaming death."<br /><br />Some beautiful lines too. :-)Susannahhttp://outofmyocean.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-71837134215084237692010-09-23T23:49:11.632-07:002010-09-23T23:49:11.632-07:00Victoria, you have expressed so well natures's...Victoria, you have expressed so well natures's cycle and the dependence of life on death. My favorite line is:<br /><br />Autumn sings in minor keyMarynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-86773224597610089782010-09-23T23:07:38.722-07:002010-09-23T23:07:38.722-07:00powerful lines!powerful lines!Priyanka Bhowmickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-21213695294203151902010-09-23T20:31:33.723-07:002010-09-23T20:31:33.723-07:00...Autumn sings in minor key.
Autumn rhythms tell ......<i>Autumn sings in minor key.<br />Autumn rhythms tell truth.<br />Life depends on death</i>...<br /><br />...indeed.dasuntouchahttp://dasuntoucha.blogspot.com/2010/08/longing-for-fall.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-40671703243778682722010-09-23T20:29:43.606-07:002010-09-23T20:29:43.606-07:00Thanks Weasel. life depends on so many things, in...Thanks Weasel. life depends on so many things, including death and poetry.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-47475597492532192282010-09-23T20:12:27.942-07:002010-09-23T20:12:27.942-07:00Wonderfully written take on the prompt! I read an ...Wonderfully written take on the prompt! I read an essay earlier today, in which it stated, "Life depends on poetry," but in many more words than that, lol! =)<br /><br />-WeaselWeaselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.com