tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post3989462226704207844..comments2024-03-09T00:15:50.624-08:00Comments on And Now Poems: Something DifferentVictoriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-50985502858473114782010-09-25T17:22:12.317-07:002010-09-25T17:22:12.317-07:00Dear Victoria,
This form is really powerful. Your ...Dear Victoria,<br />This form is really powerful. Your words dance and portray a pretty little drama where the haiku becomes the highlight,the climax, a cliffhanger.<br /><br />And the subject - magical!ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-24838055962283324992010-09-23T20:13:00.187-07:002010-09-23T20:13:00.187-07:00This is fun just to travel this magical way for a ...This is fun just to travel this magical way for a few stanzas, Victoria. I'm glad your mythical creature was a unicorn and you did this unfamiliar poem form amazingly well. I couldn't figure one out for myself but may try it laterJudy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-66575784035190516082010-09-23T05:35:23.419-07:002010-09-23T05:35:23.419-07:00I love this mystical quest - full of searching and...I love this mystical quest - full of searching and incidental discovery. Excellent.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-64141992665176186722010-09-22T13:40:12.613-07:002010-09-22T13:40:12.613-07:00Glorious imagery. I love the coyote laughing...the...Glorious imagery. I love the coyote laughing...the dolphin, the peregrine.........this is a wonderful leaping poem! I look forward to more!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-86546687473617244562010-09-22T07:05:17.325-07:002010-09-22T07:05:17.325-07:00Thanks Mary and Diane for commenting on my poems s...Thanks Mary and Diane for commenting on my poems so consistently. i like this new (to me) form too.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-59972001966308808512010-09-21T16:47:16.149-07:002010-09-21T16:47:16.149-07:00Victoria, you have so many beautiful images in thi...Victoria, you have so many beautiful images in this poem. I have decided I just love this form that I had never heard of before. And, as Diane said, of course, the moon!Marynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-80946916037657626682010-09-21T06:10:52.001-07:002010-09-21T06:10:52.001-07:00Oh my, a unicorn! I love the 'magic' in t...Oh my, a unicorn! I love the 'magic' in this haibun... And of course the moon! Delightful!Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.com