tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post534300810951158485..comments2024-03-09T00:15:50.624-08:00Comments on And Now Poems: Tens challenge (ten lines, ten syllables each line)Victoriahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-31821541517421723812011-04-28T13:33:11.184-07:002011-04-28T13:33:11.184-07:00Awesome words and your use of repetition only make...Awesome words and your use of repetition only makes it more powerful.<br /><br />MelanieCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-78113927837671503072011-04-27T07:20:21.629-07:002011-04-27T07:20:21.629-07:00Nice work. Very lovely.Nice work. Very lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-82361575784864473982011-04-25T10:20:29.934-07:002011-04-25T10:20:29.934-07:00Thought-provoking. Wakes some deeply rooted anxiet...Thought-provoking. Wakes some deeply rooted anxiety... Great work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-17303943886688123972011-04-24T22:20:41.912-07:002011-04-24T22:20:41.912-07:00Lovely piece, Victoria; you were certainly up to t...Lovely piece, Victoria; you were certainly up to the challenge! I liked how the heart wasn't just beating but banging and the mind was churning. Thanks for sharing this one for the rally!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-59444836594027094642011-04-24T08:03:09.428-07:002011-04-24T08:03:09.428-07:00That is awesome! :)That is awesome! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-67339114290309977472011-04-24T05:33:42.174-07:002011-04-24T05:33:42.174-07:00Victoria, this is wonderful. I found the repetitio...Victoria, this is wonderful. I found the repetition a perfect accompanyment to the message.K McGeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08887192135120988397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-73921995973993787792011-04-23T13:41:29.702-07:002011-04-23T13:41:29.702-07:00Such an interesting format with a lots of interest...Such an interesting format with a lots of interesting thoughts.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-39962587701807284522011-04-23T11:15:41.674-07:002011-04-23T11:15:41.674-07:00Now this is a poem that DEMANDS attention! Job wel...Now this is a poem that DEMANDS attention! Job well done.Lovely :)Jayhttp://carefreewanderer.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-61128440129544641562011-04-23T11:00:31.616-07:002011-04-23T11:00:31.616-07:00Finely formed with a strong and important message ...Finely formed with a strong and important message ;)Tigerbritehttp://www.planetcyberluz.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-21397800315123109392011-04-23T07:28:21.136-07:002011-04-23T07:28:21.136-07:00truly haunting... what a lovely poem!
http://pink...truly haunting... what a lovely poem!<br /><br />http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2011/04/getting-high-on-sobriety.htmlBing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-62962150087690368932011-04-23T03:37:26.646-07:002011-04-23T03:37:26.646-07:00I just love the writing, and the repetition in it,...I just love the writing, and the repetition in it, Victoria! :) very nice!Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-86750300903816861632011-04-22T23:58:51.803-07:002011-04-22T23:58:51.803-07:00Wise & sensible piece of writing.Wise & sensible piece of writing.Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-60463523509335264482011-04-22T19:21:25.475-07:002011-04-22T19:21:25.475-07:00Wise and wonderful message, Victoria...I get in th...Wise and wonderful message, Victoria...I get in the doldrums and then I read something you have written and I feel bad for feeling bad, pick myself up and carry on.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-31069455377081358842011-04-22T18:20:01.255-07:002011-04-22T18:20:01.255-07:00Thanks for cheering me up :)
Great job. you GOT my...Thanks for cheering me up :)<br />Great job. you GOT my attention!<br /><br />Henry ClemmonsHenry Clemmonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04156533198976128355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-25059666847140909392011-04-22T12:43:39.524-07:002011-04-22T12:43:39.524-07:0010 stars! that is lovely :)10 stars! that is lovely :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-84368906877780749902011-04-22T12:36:54.890-07:002011-04-22T12:36:54.890-07:00Phenomenal - a very direct message well expressed....Phenomenal - a very direct message well expressed. Really hit me, this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-68228280521598120362011-04-22T12:30:26.551-07:002011-04-22T12:30:26.551-07:00Wow, great stuff. Attention grabbing and powerful...Wow, great stuff. Attention grabbing and powerful.Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-18101307840463581382011-04-21T21:58:30.867-07:002011-04-21T21:58:30.867-07:00Oh! now i indeed will pay more attention. loved th...Oh! now i indeed will pay more attention. loved the style of it.Paulamihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16435492677755748845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-24681781597370022102011-04-21T19:37:21.332-07:002011-04-21T19:37:21.332-07:00A reather nice poem, caought my attion and held it...A reather nice poem, caought my attion and held it to the end !<br />Well done !<br />Happy Rally<br />JL&BJL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-43413282857269757212011-04-21T17:26:33.576-07:002011-04-21T17:26:33.576-07:00brilliant..
Invite you to join poets rally wee...brilliant..<br /><br /><br /><br />Invite you to join poets rally week 42, awards are given to first time participants.<br /> <br />You will love the encouragements you get once you are in and make commitment.<br /><br />Love your blog and writing style.<br /><br />You Rock!<br />xxxHyde Park Poetry Palacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-71983727014886939202011-04-21T10:29:46.510-07:002011-04-21T10:29:46.510-07:00Another wonderful poem Victoria. I hope you put yo...Another wonderful poem Victoria. I hope you put your wisdom book together. And I am always impressed with form poems that really work like this, where you don't feel the form when you read. NIce work.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-63151508570581405042011-04-20T23:45:04.894-07:002011-04-20T23:45:04.894-07:00Most powerful poem, Victoria. Yes, I'm paying ...Most powerful poem, Victoria. Yes, I'm paying attention. Thank you for your wise words.Lynnenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-37617805767949197882011-04-20T22:35:32.226-07:002011-04-20T22:35:32.226-07:00Absolutely brilliant! Thank you for your splendid ...Absolutely brilliant! Thank you for your splendid offering!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-66359753661558038532011-04-20T06:30:57.870-07:002011-04-20T06:30:57.870-07:00Wow, amazing poem and the ending hits hard. So tr...Wow, amazing poem and the ending hits hard. So true. I will pay attention.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7149194012030152792.post-30927959827497974852011-04-20T06:15:07.701-07:002011-04-20T06:15:07.701-07:00Excellent, Victoria. I enjoy form poems. One can&...Excellent, Victoria. I enjoy form poems. One can't help but to pay attention to the message in this poem! So many things to pay attention to.Marynoreply@blogger.com