Thursday, August 25, 2011

Shy Ghost Confesses

Happiest I've ever been,
unseen, between, at edge
no pressure, no one needs me.
I see, hear, understand,
no burden of being seen,
heard, understood, free.
Haunting is my heaven.

4 comments:

  1. A different style for you, I think, Victoria. I like it!

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  2. What a neat way to approach this confessions of a ghost prompt! I like this. And thank you for visiting my blog and leaving your thoughtful comments!

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  3. This is so interesting and I'm wondering what is truth here. I can see the freeness of being a ghost. I want to be seen, heard, and definitely be understood. What would it be like not to have those things to worry about? Hmmm, interesting!

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