Loss upon loss upon loss,
pretty patterns fade fast.
Ribs, spikes, textured curls
surrender to infinite patience.
Sea hones shell down
to essential spiral
I really like this response to the prompt about the sea bringing loss. I could not relate to the sea meaning loss after loss when I looked at the prompt but now I see it so clearly!
Loss just chips away at the patterns in life..they bring us down to basics I think. I like the way you got to this point here. That is what it means to me. Love this!
Losses do seem to be compounded sometime. So very sad.
ReplyDeleteI really like this response to the prompt about the sea bringing loss. I could not relate to the sea meaning loss after loss when I looked at the prompt but now I see it so clearly!
ReplyDeleteLoss just chips away at the patterns in life..they bring us down to basics I think. I like the way you got to this point here. That is what it means to me. Love this!
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