Saturday, June 26, 2010

Imagine prompt for Writers' Island

Perfect Empathy

Imagine perfect empathy.
I feel you. You feel me.
Margins fade. Egos recede.
Every life counts the same.
No number one No elect.
No justification. No meanness.
No outcasts. No losers..
Every life counts the same.
Margins fade, Egos recede.
I feel you. You feel me.
Imagine perfect empathy. .

Victoria Hendricks
June 26, 2011
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6 comments:

  1. MaryJune 26, 2010 at 3:52 PM

    Stunning, Victoria, absolutely stunning. If only this could be, it would be beautiful!

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  2. AnonymousJune 27, 2010 at 9:59 AM

    Wonderfully imaginative!

    Elizabeth

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  3. Wayne PitchkoJune 27, 2010 at 12:35 PM

    nicely done....thanks for sharing this

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  4. Diane TJune 27, 2010 at 12:48 PM

    Oh, how I wish perfect empathy existed. Then it would be a perfect world... in reality, not just imagination. A breathtaking philosophical poem!

    http://troublebeingstrong.blogspot.com/2010/06/to-have-wings-of-bird.html

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  5. AnonymousJune 28, 2010 at 2:14 AM

    Imagining it is the start of making it happen. Nicely done.

    http://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.com

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  6. VictoriaJune 28, 2010 at 6:02 PM

    thanks all for your comments on my wish for the world. I do believe that imagining this and other good things do bring them closer.

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