I see you sleeping
in pile of bright pillows,
shining hair fanned out
in pale early light,
breaths even, quiet,
all promise, potential.
Dreams seem so real
in the morning.
I agree with other comments: beautiful, wonderful scene and precious feeling. A touch of sadness - in the morning of life we have such potential, such promise - too many of us don't realize that potential.
Such a beautiful poem, Victoria, full of peace and promise of sunshine.
ReplyDeleteJust lovely, Victoria. I can see that hair all fanned out. Such beautiful deep sleep.
ReplyDeletePeaceful, lovely.
ReplyDeleteSuch a scene full of love and peace, Victoria. This really gave me a smile and a good feel.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful, peaceful scene you describe. Your words leave me smiling. Dreams do seem stronger, more real in the morning light.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, wonderful vision, Victoria, and the ending a punch!
ReplyDeleteI agree with other comments: beautiful, wonderful scene and precious feeling. A touch of sadness - in the morning of life we have such potential, such promise - too many of us don't realize that potential.
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