Monday, November 7, 2011

Plea (a wordle response)

dappled, piercing, shell, air, strident, reignite, delirium, emit, pleat, pitch, swish, seem

Pitch me strident.
Reignite delirium.
Better piercing swish
of dappled air
than one more day
as empty shell
pressed into pleat
able to emit
no sound at all.

4 comments:

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  2. Oh, I definitely do like this, the depth you found in using the words. Yes, definitely better to be strident than soundless.

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  3. Excellent and very concise! You molded these wordle words into such a meaningful poem!

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  4. Yeah for your completion of this wordless. I just can't get them. I'm so glad to read yours though and others who make sense of it all. :)

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