Saturday, November 19, 2011

Spark

Drowned fires smolder.
Water chills to ice.
Diamond studded sky
encircles dead planet.
Mindless spark awaits
next chance to ignite life.

This one is from a wordle prompt based on the words diamond, mindless, spark, fires, ice, smolder, oblivious, sky, silence, planet, trapped, drowned
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9 comments:

  1. MaryNovember 19, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    Excellent wordling from this series of words, Victoria.

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  2. brenda wNovember 20, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Concise and pointed, ending with a touch of hope. I love it, Victoria.

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  3. flaubertNovember 21, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    Victoria, I echo both Mary and Brenda. Nice concise piece.

    Pamela

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  4. PeggyNovember 21, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    I really like where you took these wordle words, Victoria!

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  5. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 21, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    "mindless spark"

    I often wonder if we are just random happenings arising from the void...

    13 Wordle Haiku

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  6. gautami tripathyNovember 22, 2011 at 9:36 AM

    Excellent!

    oblivion

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  7. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryNovember 25, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    hopeful and wonderful,

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  8. WillowNovember 27, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    Excellent poem, I didn't even guess it was the wordl until reading the note.

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  9. Judy RoneyDecember 4, 2011 at 5:27 PM

    Meaningful wordle, Victoria. Wow!

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