Laughing mob of children
tumbles into soft afternoon
Jettisons back packs,
lunch boxes, planners,
rules about how you
must behave at school.
Sun breaks through to smile
at laughing mob of children.
This was written for Three Word Wednesday.. The words were mob, behave, jettison
Love this joyous poem and your clever use of the words. penny
ReplyDeleteSchool's out..yes, such a good feeling..even so when observing and remembering how it felt for ourselves..great piece..and thanks for following..Jae
ReplyDeleteI liked how you wrote this, Victoria, how you began and ended with the same line! Well crafted.
ReplyDeleteGorgeously. playfully done. Fantabulous imagery.
ReplyDeleteFresh, nimble, lively -- entertaining...
ReplyDeleteSuch a dear and lovingly penned poem. It puts faith in teachers and parents.
ReplyDeleteHank
hmmm...to be you again! wouldn't be nice if we could jettison our worries as easy as a backpack? very sweet.
ReplyDeleteOh my is it that time again already!? Seems too early!
ReplyDeleteWhat a marvelous scene your words bring to life. It brings back sweet memories.
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