Saturday, November 19, 2011

Spark

Drowned fires smolder.
Water chills to ice.
Diamond studded sky
encircles dead planet.
Mindless spark awaits
next chance to ignite life.

This one is from a wordle prompt based on the words diamond, mindless, spark, fires, ice, smolder, oblivious, sky, silence, planet, trapped, drowned

9 comments:

  1. Excellent wordling from this series of words, Victoria.

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  2. Concise and pointed, ending with a touch of hope. I love it, Victoria.

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  3. Victoria, I echo both Mary and Brenda. Nice concise piece.

    Pamela

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  4. I really like where you took these wordle words, Victoria!

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  5. "mindless spark"

    I often wonder if we are just random happenings arising from the void...

    13 Wordle Haiku

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  6. Excellent poem, I didn't even guess it was the wordl until reading the note.

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  7. Meaningful wordle, Victoria. Wow!

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