Friday, February 1, 2013

Nightmare

Falling
Flailing
Failing
to find
any hook
to hang
hope on
Failing
Flailing
Falling

5 comments:

  1. Yes, Victoria, that definitely would be an awful nightmare.

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  2. What a nightmare! You describe it so well in single words. Amazing.

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  3. Your nightmare poem hits frighteningly close to how I sometimes feel in the daytime, Victoria. So few words here, good format, powerful.

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  4. a nightmare song woven beautifully with words..smiles:)God<3u

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