Sunday, March 4, 2012

Random D - Daffodil

Daffodil blooms bright
and early, brings hope
that spring and spring
and spring will dance
lightly one after another,
and I can forget that
one will be my last.


  1. Yes, we all will have one last spring! We never know when it will be.

  2. Ends with a disconcerting thought that makes the reminder in the first part even stronger. I guess I too prefer to forget which things will be my last.

  3. Daffies

    A bunch of daffodils;
    I bought them because they reminded me of you.
    Of the way you brighten up my day.
    Of the warmth that wraps itself around me.
    A poor substitute for your arms,
    yet these thoughts and feelings exude, and a smile
    as bright
    as a bunch of daffodils.

  4. What a surprise ending on this beautiful spring poem. Great job!