Friday, November 2, 2012

Full Owl Moon (PAD 2)

Full owl moon peppers lawn
with puddles bright as white.
Puddles shift into shadow..
Lawn is sea of mystery,
not quite solid ground.

Truth is never simple.
Shadows shift, in, out.
Puddles of bright white
wash us in one llight.
Life is sea of mystery.


  1. Nicely stated. Sometimes I think 'life' and 'mystery' are synonyms.

  2. I love this comparison Victoria. Like the images too like puddles of moonlight and shifting shadows. Write on!

  3. Ever changing scenary in our lives. I like the metaphor I see here and the beauty and peace of the scene until the truth is told in verse two.