Friday, February 17, 2012

Purification

Loss upon loss upon loss,
pretty patterns fade fast.
Ribs, spikes, textured curls
surrender to infinite patience.
Sea hones shell down
to essential spiral

3 comments:

  1. Losses do seem to be compounded sometime. So very sad.

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  2. I really like this response to the prompt about the sea bringing loss. I could not relate to the sea meaning loss after loss when I looked at the prompt but now I see it so clearly!

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  3. Loss just chips away at the patterns in life..they bring us down to basics I think. I like the way you got to this point here. That is what it means to me. Love this!

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