I am with you in this, Victoria. Ominous poem that expresses the chaos of it all somehow. Nice work.
Eerie, Victoria. You just never know....
Good poem. People all around, active, and yet we never know who might be about to die or experience some other tragedy.
The world would be a chaos if we all knew our dying date, imagine
So scary and so true. We never know when and we'll never know why. This expresses so well what I feel as well.