Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Final Draft

Each word, breath, move, choice
reflection,deflection construct
my submission to the Book of Life.

5 comments:

  1. Oh yes! Wonderful Victoria. I too was thinking of this kind of submission but you really put it into a neat context--submission to the Book of Life.

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  2. Conscious living, excellent, Victoria…think before speaking or acting.

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  3. Victoria,

    A collective of the words of life itself!

    Eileen

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  4. Cool, Victoria. Each thing we do counts.

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  5. We each have our own book of life. Each valuable. I enjoyed thinking about your poem, Victoria.

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