Monday, May 9, 2011

Sea

Sea rolls out,
day after day,
night after night.
Birth death emotional
context irrelevant
pattern continues,
nothing ends or begins.
Sea rolls in.

9 comments:

  1. Yes, Victoria...things somehow continue, change, continue.

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  2. Oh yes, Victoria, the eternal sea while we are temporary.

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  3. I like the feel of this Victoria. It has the rhythm of the sea and unchanging change.

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  4. I really like this poem Victoria, happy to see you are from Texas and a mystic, and, all who you are. Nice poetry.

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  5. Beautiful imagery Victoria. I loved the depth of your poem. Glad to be your latest follower. I ll keep a touch with you. Thanks.

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  6. So true, the world goes on no matter what is happening in our own world. The sea is one of the constants. Wonderful writing to this prompt. You inspire me to write something now.

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  7. Great writing. Adding "sea rolls in" at the end was genius.

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  8. Yes, Victoria! This poem reminds me of why I love the sea so passionately.

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