Wonderful! What a relief that it was just a jack-o-lantern!
Whew! That was so near to being frightful!! Liked the twist in the last line!!
Victoria, I like the twist also. Nicely done.Pamela
A frightful situation needing only light. Great.
Victoria, this chilled me right to the bone. So much scarier than Halloween - the real thing, and it happens every day of the year. Very effective use of the Wordle - you handled those words like puzzle pieces. Can't believe the sheer economy of your usage of that many words in this poem~ Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/10/31/lost-soul-sun-whirl/
So tightly written!innards
Oh my, Victoria. How frightening and then, it's just a jack-o-lantern. Great Halloween poem!
What a surprise! It was not what I expected, and I loved the twist. Great contribution, thanks. :)
A scary piece of writing with a great twist at the end.I was impressed how you fitted the wordle words into such a short piece of writing - very clever.
very powerful take on the wordle.well done.
I know I read this one before but must not have commented for some reason. This has such a neat depiction of the shadow of scary so much a part of Halloween.