Sunday, July 10, 2011

Flood (from Sunday July 10 Wordle)

Galloping poem flooded logic,
onslaught sufficient to resist
world buzz of twisted thought.
Whim fluttered up from instinct,
spring released pure river of love.
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6 comments:

  1. MaryJuly 11, 2011 at 3:10 AM

    I especially like thinking about a 'galloping poem.' You did well with the words.

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  2. flaubertJuly 11, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    Nice, concise piece, Victoria.

    Pamela

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  3. LynneJuly 11, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    Love the idea of poetry's ability to resist world buzz of twisted thought. Very nice poem, Victoria.

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  4. Traci BJuly 11, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Poems do have that ability to gallop right past our logic and into the recesses of our hearts. Compact, well written verse, Victoria. :)

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  5. SusannahJuly 12, 2011 at 4:49 AM

    Nicely done. I love to see where the wordle words take us! :-)

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  6. brenda wJuly 13, 2011 at 5:38 AM

    I bet you don't even need inner tubes to float in the pure river of love. :)

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