Great poem, Victoria! Very concise and vivid, good use of the wordle words. I could picture someone asleep under a tree, being peppered with bits of moss by a friend or loved one trying to rouse him/her. I especially liked "tossed moss flossed flecks". :)
Victoria, loved your choice of words and the flow. Glad you are taking up Wordling, and look forward to reading more of your work!@ Amy Here's mine: http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/05/unexpected-turn-wordling-whirl/
Excellent! So much in so few words.
ReplyDeleteExcellent, Victoria
ReplyDeleteI could read your poetry all day, or night since it is.I could read your poetry all day, or night since it is.
ReplyDeleteGood job on this difficult wordle. Wordles are all difficult for me. Beautiful images emerge from this.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, Victoria! Very concise and vivid, good use of the wordle words. I could picture someone asleep under a tree, being peppered with bits of moss by a friend or loved one trying to rouse him/her. I especially liked "tossed moss flossed flecks". :)
ReplyDeleteThis is excellent. You've used few words and painted beautiful images. So glad you're wordling.....!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of wordling ~ glad you gave it a whirl!! :) ~Paula
ReplyDeleteVictoria, loved your choice of words and the flow. Glad you are taking up Wordling, and look forward to reading more of your work!@ Amy
ReplyDeleteHere's mine: http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/05/unexpected-turn-wordling-whirl/
Welcome to the wordle world. Nice and concise. I envy those who can create one of these things is so few words.
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