Twist of head, blink,
scan of room through
parted purple curtains,
stripped off gild, marvel
rendered reprehensible,
two entwined in clouds
of scattered clothing,
whir of stolen passion.
Very vivid, and definitely a different direction from everything else I've read so far. It amazes me how we come up with such diverse takes on the wordle.
Ah what beautifully sensual images I get from your poem!
ReplyDeleteWow! This is a whirl of color and passion unexpected . Great work!
ReplyDeleteI really like this one too Victoria. Sensual images and tells a story in just a few words! Good one!!
ReplyDeleteVery vivid, and definitely a different direction from everything else I've read so far. It amazes me how we come up with such diverse takes on the wordle.
ReplyDeleteOoo la la! A passionate surprise--wonderful write.
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