Sunday, July 3, 2011

Escape (inspired by wordle)

Reaching hands tossed
moss flossed flecks,
hurtled toward fresh face.
Dreamer turned,
flew clear of
fading siren song.

9 comments:

  1. Excellent! So much in so few words.

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  2. I could read your poetry all day, or night since it is.I could read your poetry all day, or night since it is.

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  3. Good job on this difficult wordle. Wordles are all difficult for me. Beautiful images emerge from this.

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  4. Great poem, Victoria! Very concise and vivid, good use of the wordle words. I could picture someone asleep under a tree, being peppered with bits of moss by a friend or loved one trying to rouse him/her. I especially liked "tossed moss flossed flecks". :)

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  5. This is excellent. You've used few words and painted beautiful images. So glad you're wordling.....!

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  6. Welcome to the world of wordling ~ glad you gave it a whirl!! :) ~Paula

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  7. Victoria, loved your choice of words and the flow. Glad you are taking up Wordling, and look forward to reading more of your work!@ Amy
    Here's mine: http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/07/05/unexpected-turn-wordling-whirl/

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  8. Welcome to the wordle world. Nice and concise. I envy those who can create one of these things is so few words.

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