Sunday, July 24, 2011

Wordle from Whirl -BLink

Twist of head, blink,
scan of room through
parted purple curtains,
stripped off gild, marvel
rendered reprehensible,
two entwined in clouds
of scattered clothing,
whir of stolen passion.

5 comments:

  1. Ah what beautifully sensual images I get from your poem!

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  2. Wow! This is a whirl of color and passion unexpected . Great work!

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  3. I really like this one too Victoria. Sensual images and tells a story in just a few words! Good one!!

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  4. Very vivid, and definitely a different direction from everything else I've read so far. It amazes me how we come up with such diverse takes on the wordle.

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  5. Ooo la la! A passionate surprise--wonderful write.

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