Wednesday, April 27, 2011

In hope of hope

Stagnant afternoon
air, thoughts hang heavy
inspiration slows
doom looms invisible.
Best I can do is open
window. Perhaps hope
will blow in by dark.

4 comments:

  1. Lets hope so Victoria! Keep those windows open! I like your description of a stagnant afternoon. Excellent.

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  2. Keep that window open, Victoria!

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  3. ...fires of hope...
    Burn inside all... including the Pope!
    ...even by dark, hope can pop
    driving your soul to a rainbow top..
    hmmmm...I love your choice of words.."inspiration slows
    doom looms invisible"

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  4. Yes, Victoria, and hope needs but a mere feather of a breeze to float on in.

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