Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Mirror

Over heads of children
you look straight
into my eyes,
beam complete history
of twenty years
together
confirm pain and joy
mirror back
my life.

3 comments:

  1. Excellent mirror poem, Victoria. A mirror aways reflects truth, withholds nothing.

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  2. What a nice moment you capture in your mirror. Truth mirrors back your life. Lots to think about in a few words. Great job!

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  3. Really nice poem, Victoria. This would have been perfect to have included in our anthology, "The Mirror Looks Back," but of course you hadn't written it yet.

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